Leni: (sniffles) I miss him so bad. Rita: (Gasps) Lincoln! "Yeah, I guess that's fair," Luna said, "we made a promise with you and we couldn't keep it." I don't want this stupid bunch of brats in my life anymore! Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. They were thinking that they should've told their kids no and that they were going to stay at Aunt Ruth's for the weekend. Let me tell you this! Especially, useless, pathetic, irresponsible, arrogant, ungrateful, spoiled, annoying, disgusting, stupid, superstitious IMBECILES!!! "Aunt Ruth, please reconsider," Rita started with, before she interrupted by Ruth. Lynn Sr. also tried to say something, but he couldn't either. Luck. *Cries* It's going to take me days to fix this baby! But that's only because we don't have a room anymore." 5 months of research ruined. ", Lynn: "After how badly I treated you? YOU'RE THE WORST FAMILY TO EVER LIVE!!!! (The family screams in horror. The woman groaned and responded with, "It's not so much the dip that got them in trouble, rather it was their lack of swimwear that did." Lola: What if we get stung or bitten by a shark!? I hate that you sold my bed and everything I had! And with that the parents ran into the room and closed the door. After a few moments of static, a female voice was heard on the other end, "Hello, Felix. I don't want you quit something you love because of me. Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. Leni asked, an eyebrow raised, confused. So about the Duke, Had he ever felt like he was just a glorified peasant in his time around is ten sisters? [In stepped David, Winston, Skippy, Silas, Paige, Francisco, Benny, Sam, Chaz, and Bobby. Also, any negative comments or comments suggesting that I'm trying to paint the siblings in a bad light will be deleted and I will block you. Rita: Kids, your friends are here. He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). Hey guys, I'm sorry I was so horrible. What's going on here?! after they let go, Lincoln notices Lynn standing with her head down.) 2022 - 2023 Add to Favourites Comment I let my pride get the best to me! No Such Luck / Frog Wild. Meatbrain here and her dumb softball, this never would have happened! Luna: (with a broken voice) "We're really sorry bro! Lana: (tearful) He might tell everyone in town and everyone will hate us. QUIET! Directors Kyle Marshall (segment Frog Wild) Chris Savino (segment No Such Luck) Writers Chris Savino We said we were sorry. the goth girl added. Lincoln: FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Despite the pain his body was in, Felix grabbed his walkie talkie and said, "Maddie." An alternate ending to Underratedheros story, "Requiem For A Loud". He staggers inside, weak and collapsed. Keep on writing fics like this! Actually, there's something I need to do! I have failed as a human being. I don't want to pick a movie you guys possiblyly won't enjoy, I want to watch something all of us will enjoy." NOTE: I am aware this episode has been overly bashed to death. SQUIRRELS WIN!" Time i sort out these looney superstitions once and for all!! ], Lola: "What's with that squirrel today? Takes place in the middle of the events of the infamous episode No Such Luck. [The softball playoffs. (With his remaining strength, he scrambles over to the house. Please leave non-hurtful comments down below, otherwise you will be blocked. (She sees the smashed trophy case and gasps). But seriously, we made a mess of everything! She said, in an angry tone, before blowing a raspberry her parents, covering them in her spit. she responded back with, in a bit of an uninterested tone. Lincoln: Okay. Ive often helped feed your pets and come to your stunt moves. But Lynn Jr. yelled, "SIT DOWN!" I'M A STUPID, SENSELESS BULLY!!! ", Luna: (opens her arms out) "Come here, bro." We feel so ashamed!" Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! Lynn Sr.: But son..if you wanted time off, all you had to do was just say so! I can't let those crazy beasts see me! Lynn Sr. stuttered for a few moments and said, "Ground us?! "Gross and immature, if you ask me," Lola said, also glaring at her parents. [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] What kind of family would do this to one of their own? OUR PRECIOUS TROPHIES! I'm calling the cops! (Lincoln picks up the head and jumps up and down on it several times.). I'll just play softball all by myself! He managed to, but with a twist. Post-Story Notice: Anyway. WE MAKE EVERYTHING WORSE!!! ", Lynn: (angered, she gets closer to Lincoln and raises a fist at him) "If you don't get out of here, I'm gonna-", Luna: (pull Lynn back) "WHOA! Luan: Maybe these silly superstitions werent such a good idea. Youre our brother! Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! Ruthless People extended ending13. @JackLeighton19 Idea on How to End This Story: Employee: (Grunts) That's it! Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. he turned to the three men, who started sweating nervously, afraid of what would happen to them if they didn't say anything. ", Baseball Announcer: "I think you're rubbing off on me, Pep. I hope you enjoy, please try to be as gentle yet honest as possible as to what you think about the story (this is my first fanfiction in general). (heads to Vanzilla and gets inside, they drive of to the movies). Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. (Previously on The Loud House. Sweaty Pants here! Lana: What did you expect us to do Lincoln? I'm sorry I was such a bad loser, all I wanted was for Lincoln to support me, to support us. No Such Luck/Frog Wild Episode aired Mar 14, 2017 TV-Y7 22 m IMDb RATING 5.1 /10 218 YOUR RATING Rate Animation Adventure Comedy Lincoln is rejected by his sisters because he is "bad luck"; Lincoln and Lana protect the frogs from being dissected. Luna. She then added, "I was just talking to my boyfriend when suddenly the sliding door closes and I can't get back in. Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. My last one just got messed up and i wish to make one properly. This triggered events that none of the Loud House family could have seen. Anyway, as the title suggests, this is an alternate ending fanfic for Loud House Season 2 episode "Suite and Sour." Pre-Story Notice: It's amazing. [Normal - Remake - Original - Alternate Ending] 11 Louds a Leapin' Intern for the Worse / The Old and the Restless. If you didn't show up, I don't want to think about what would've happened." I even threatened you to go to my game! (Cries) All my precious tiaras. And Lily was doing, whatever 15 month old babies do when nobody's really watching them (another author interruption: I know this sounds vague and it sounds like Lily is going to hurt herself but she's not. No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane Cartoons Comics Funny Comics Loud House Rule 34 The Loud House Lincoln The Loud House Fanart Loud House Characters Funny Comic Strips Movies Coming Out Sonic And Amy More information . ", Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! "So you thought that the best way to find a ghost, which I know for a fact aren't haunting this hotel, was to knock out your air conditioner," the man said, as he gestured to the hole that once had an air conditioner there, "Do you realize how ridiculous and stupid you sound right now?" I hate softball! It's been a day since Lincoln tried to convinced them that he wasn't bad luck. They were wondering how could this room be these three idiots, they were booked until tomorrow. After he said that, he finally saw his kids' faces and immediately started backing away, but the kids stomped forward, towards him and Rita and they completely surrounded them. turns her attention to Lincoln) "Get out! News flash; I live here!". CircularBoat742 19 March 2017 User blog:CircularBoat742. (Lincoln says nothing to his mother. I hate that you all act so smart and serious and important when you're not! I spread one little white lie just to get more free time because i cant afford to come to so many actvities all in one go! They suddenly feel saddened, guilty, broken and worried. "As grateful as I am that I saved you from making a dangerous decision," the man said, his tone getting lighter for a moment before returning to a serious tone, "I'm afraid that doesn't do much to the amount of trouble you're all in.". ", Rita: "And this time, we'll let Lincoln decide what movie we'll watch. Luna: [Blushes] Really? "They have a point there honey," Lynn Sr. said, before immediately clasping his mouth shut, his wife glaring at him for saying that. Felix turned to the clock on the wall, it was almost 1 in the afternoon, why were these kids still in a room they were supposed to have been long gone from. "That we had to learn about all of this when hotel security barged up to our room due to numerous complaints!" You just mess up everything! [Later, Lincolns room is unlocked and his furnature was back. That was my favourite bat! *Sniff* I thought he liked our things! Lisa: That's the last time I ever fall for such phone-baloney! Lincoln: That's what i always say. It's not me who's the problem, it's you and your stubborn nature. (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! ", [The family and Bobby cheer for Lynn as she makes her run around the field. We had no idea this family could be so gullible. He's a big fan of you, Lincoln; and he told me that you're working with news. Just tell us and well let you skip it. Those honors go to Nickelodeon, Teletoon, Chris Savino, Stephen Hillenberg, John A. Davis, Louis Sachar and Gold Cartoonist (who is located on fanfiction). Lynn Sr.: I can't believe we messed up so bad like this! Lynn Sr. bit his lip for a moment, rubbed the back of his head with hand, and then sighed, "It might take a while and it might not be easy, but I'm certain we can regain their trust." We would never force you to go if you don't want to. ", Mascot:[in a familiar voice] "Hey, man! ", "Can I just say that I was only out there because I was accidentally locked out." Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. I demand an explanation! Trying explaining that!" Lincoln: "Coming!" Lincoln: I admit, it was stupid of me to drag that lie on, but while i learn an important lesson not to be a fibber more than i needed, what do you numbnuts learn!? You tricked us in the first place. But in hindsight, I guess I should've thought about it more before lying to you guys. Also please don't flame me. (sniffles) I'd better make a home fast. I don't even care about that anymore. She was bringing Lincoln her Valentines day card.] Lincoln: (with angry tears) I'm throwing this stupid, disgusting thing away! ], Baseball Announcer:[clinging to Pep]"SQUIRRELS WIN! 2 months had come and gone and the parents were no longer grounded. The family sees this and gasps in shock.). Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. The heat increases. "And we're glad they did," Lisa added, "Because thanks to the man that stopped by as well as a woman at the front desk, we were able to learn that you and dad apparently couldn't keep your own promise." We didn't find any though." helluvaboss. Later, in jail). Unfortunately, they were not quick enough and, in a swift moment, the four were launched into the room across the hall, landing in a painful pile on the floor. Start talking. Lori said afterwards, knowing that everyone would've been confused by her talk. Lori responded with, yelling the last few words. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Why did you kick me out of the house? Now, let me make this clear! Lincoln: You know what!? Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Lola: Hey, Lincoln! "And mom should know better," Lori shouted back, glaring at her mother specifically, "Then to take us to that woman!" She started pacing the room, or more specifically around the couch. Lola: If it wasn't for Miss. Lola yelled. Taking the device out of the girl's hand. "What," Felix said, "what is it?" Especially Lynn. She also knew it wasn't about Jeffrey, the manager, because any reviews he gave to staff were done over a month ago. I've gotten complaints of loud noises, stuff breaking and a possible brawl breaking out in one hotel room. Said baby had an angry face and she glared at her mom and dad, "Poo poo!" WE RUINED OUR WHOLE FAMILY!!! "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. I loved winning so much that didn't take my failure like a good sport, and started thiswhole bycalling you bad luck. I get that i was pretty stupid myself to spread that stupid fib, i should have just opened up! Whats next? The sound of typing on a computer was heard for a few minutes. Lucy shouted, "WE DREAD GOING TO VISIT YOU AND DREAD LOOKING AT YOUR GROSS FACE!" If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Lincoln: Lucy! You're all insane!!! Bad luck never happened before when he was there..but he said all we do is just mess things up..we really are the worst family ever Rita: We're sorry kids. It was created for a St. Patrick's Day episode, but flopped hard. i certainly didn't expect something like that, but i guess curiosity must be fed. Since the room is occupied, it should've shown up as that in the computer database. ", Lincoln: (to his parents) "What kind of parents lock their own child out? Lynn: Well, its because of that costume that i won my last game! Re-Uniting With Lincoln by KingMercury254. I'm giving it a Teen rating, because while there is no serious violence in this story, there are still some moments that might not be comfortable for youngsters to have to read (primarily shouting and lots of it). Except for Lynn). But i didnt expect to be ejected from the house and lose everything i had! Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. (Lynn stops) "I forgive you. (She storms out of his room and into the hallway. I'm not bad luck. Lincoln: You can't do anything right! Lincoln: Stop it! And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. Don't fight now! Mentioning their Aunt Ruth's bunions caused the siblings to gag, before returning back to normal and glaring at their parents. You overreact to everything! And then blew more raspberries and spit on them some more (hopefully the last author interruption but if not then I'll let you know: I know her seat is located in the first row behind the driver in canon but for this instance of going along with not wanting to look at their parents, the siblings put Lily's seat in the far back to help the other siblings not have to look at their parents, I know this is a little wrong, but please understand it shows how mad the siblings are). You can never come back. Also, no one in the original knew about the legal consequences of locking out a minor. "Uh, sweetie," her dad said, in a nervous tone, "Think you and Luna can get out of the front seats, so I can drive us home." BECAUSE I DON'T WANT YOU LITTLE DEMONS ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN!" "We promised you wouldn't notice we were there while had a nice relaxing weekend, right?" Rita Her Rights alt ending11. Lincoln Loud, the middle child of the family, was brought to his older sister's baseball league from his own will. Lincoln: (to the viewers) Welp, I may be forced to stay here for quite a long time, but at least I finally got away from my so-called "family"! I hate grave digging and poems and I HATE DESPICABLE SPORTS!!! Knowing they sealed the deal and there's no way they will ever have to go back to Aunt Ruth's, Lincoln said, "Well so long, freakshow. (Lincoln, without hesitation, hugs her, with the rest of the sisters joining in for another group hug. The Loud House: No Such Luck (2 Alternate Endings) View source Ah yes, No Such Luck. Eventually Lincoln had the courage to say something, but was stuttering as he did so, "Areare you saying" he wanted to finished that sentence but felt that he couldn't. Luan: Yeah, our luck has just run out! They notice the huge mess of items in the yard and are horrified.). ", Lola: "Don't try to fool us! I hate boring science lectures! Well thanks [Sam then kissed Luna on the cheek. "Yeah, we literally got kicked out of the room," Lori started with, also angry, "BECAUSE OF YOU!!!" I can't even begin to imagine what they'll do their parents when they find them.'. Leni: Like, I don't like it here anymore either! "WELL I HATE ALL OF YOU, TOO!" I certainly am not! ", Lori: (with a broken voice) "What kind of monsters are we?!". We're already hanging on a thread as it is! Ruth shouted back, insulted. Maybe I should just stop playing softball for a while. Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. In. None of the kids wanted to talk to their parents and the parents didn't know what to say to their kids. (breaks from the hugs) *sighs* "I'm sorry for lying. Luna spots Lincoln). (The employee obliges, and the police arrive to arrest Lincoln, just as the rest of the Louds arrive.). Lincoln: Lana. After she did, Leni didn't get angry, but she did get upset, very upset at her parents. Lincoln: I don't believe it! Lisa: I have truly disgraced the scientific community Lola: Does this mean Linky doesn't love us anymore? Lincoln: "Oh really." Lisa: (beat) Okay, i admit, maybe there were many explanations to resolve such crazy, inane hooey. We know we don't deserve it, but we hope you can forgive us! All of you!" Lincoln: (crying berserker tears) NO!!! I hate that you all are as dumb as a big fat rock! Maybe I should just quit the team. Who do you think you are, calling us names and insulting us like that!? Honest! I hate pageants! I hate golf! Lynn Sr.: OUR ONLY SON DESPISES US, WE WERE COMPLETE IDIOTS, WE RUINED HIM AND WE DESERVE IT!!!! Lucy walked towards him and they wrapped their arms around each other's shoulders. And if you do, I'll have you arrested! ", Lincoln: "Oh, and I'm sorry for breaking your golf clubs, Lori. With how much of a hatedom Lynn Jr got after this episode, I had to have her own up to her mistakes. I hate that you don't love me anymore! And with that, they headed towards the lobby. She shouted that last part at the top of her lungs. He gives her bat a furious glare, smashes it in half and throws it out the window. IM hoping to show this to Nickelodeon themselves someday. Why are you being arrested?! Am. Lincoln: Which is why Im making you all wear squirrel suits for the rest of your lives, [They all gulp. Leni: Linky, if you didnt want to come to my fashion show, you just had to say so! ", Luna: (with a sad look on her face) "No. You locked me out of my room, sold all my furniture and made me into a thing!! ", Lincoln: (to Lola) "Lola, all those pageants I went to, did anything bad happen those times? Lead walls will keep my bad luck from affecting anyone. ", [The sound of the ball getting hit by the bat is heard and the rest of Lynn's team runs the remaining bases. They started running towards them as fast as possible, when suddenly, the sound of a fist pounding against the door is heard. Post a journal. ", Lincoln: "You know what, Lynn. I do not own The Loud House, it belongs to Nickelodeon Animation, created by Chris Savino. We wont! Ronnie Anne: [Sighs] The softball game she accused Lincoln of being bad lack was on Friday the 13th. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. "WE HATE THOSE STUPID CATS OF YOURS!" How can I help you?" Lola: WE'RE HORRIBLE BRATS!!! ", Pep:[downright bored] "I think I've wasted my life. She pointed to the back row of seats. Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! "Not cool, guys." Especially with the ending, so I created this story to give it a better ending. This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. Lynn Sr. and Rita wanted to say something, but saw the glares on their kids' faces and knew that they wouldn't get anywhere arguing. I just hurt Lynn! Leni: Linky, dont shout. Honey, we're back. No one said anything, not the siblings, not the obnoxious guys, not Felix, not the woman on the other end, just silence. You're scaring even me. Ruth yelled, "I DON'T WANT YOU OR YOUR UNGRATEFUL BRATS OR YOUR MANCHILD HUSBAND ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN? Lynn: (sighs) Who am I kidding? ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. MY TROPHIES!!! But right now, ive had it! Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. So we've been in here trying to pass the time. Rita: Honey! First, she got groans from her children and then Lola said, "What isn't wrong with Aunt Ruth?" Lincoln: You are a stupid bully, a coward, a nobody, a freak, a lamebrain, a beast and the worst sister ever AND THAT'S THAT!!!! ], [They pant heavily, before realizing it was all a nightmare. Just because of superstitions?! +7 more. Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? "Good," Jeffrey said, stepping aside and point to the doorway, "Now get out! Eventually, Rita broke the long silence, saying, "Kids, I know you're angry at us for causing us to be kicked out of the hotel. I can't believe they said they'd tease you for eternity. While this Season 2 Loud House episode might not be as bad as 'Brawl in the Family' or 'No Such Luck,' it's up there. I didn't think you guys would believe I was bad luck, even going as far as to lock me out. After one loss, she claims that Lincoln is bad luck. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. "SAVE IT, RITA!" ), Lincoln: But you know what!? I don't expect it to be good, I just felt like doing an alternative ending. ", Lucy: "After all, it's not like we always go to each others events 100% of the time, so why should you? (to the viewers) "Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna have some fun with my family." "Her pudding is at least a hundred years old and will cause us all to go to the hospital for stomach pumping," Lisa added. Whenever you fell like you need a break, you're free to take a rain check. Let's go! Luan: (tearful) We'll never be able to show our faces in public again. He helped hold us all together and outings just won't be the same without Lincoln. I kinda have mixed feelings on this alternate ending, though Im leaning more on the approval side. Luan brought it. More information No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane More like this House Cartoon Cartoon Fan Cartoon Shows ", Lincoln: "But just because you lost your game, doesn't mean you have to pin it on me! Lincoln grabs 11 squirrel mascots and put them on his parents and sisters, minus Lily.]. Youve made your point! We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. Lucy: "He's actually doing pretty good." Lynn: [nerviously] "Yeah, decent enough. After that, for the remainder of the car ride, nothing was heard but the sounds of Rita's crying and her tears dropping from her face. While eating breakfast, Lincoln learns from his sisters that they have planned activities later in the day. White hair extended ending9. You took it too far! Lola: *Gasp* My lovely car! *Later in the Duke's room, Lincoln approaches Angus* Angus: Ah Lincoln, What's seems to be on your mind? Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". Sam: Luna, I got your letter. Nobody wanted to answer, but they knew things would get uglier if they didn't, so, Luna made the decision to walk slowly to the door and open it just enough to see who's out there but not to let them in. Fool Me Twice extended ending10. And then, as quickly as it appeared, the noises disappeared. I hate gator wrestling! I hate the fact that you never take responsibility! #The loud house #lincoln loud #lori loud #leni loud #luna loud #Luan Loud #Lynn Loud #Lucy Loud #lana loud #lola loud #lisa loud #lily loud #the loud house headcanons #the loud . Lincoln: I'd like to keep this in private, but i got a question for you angus. I am bad luck! "We don't have a hotel room anymore," Lincoln said, in a very angry tone that the parents weren't used to seeing. Someone at front desk please respond." Lola added, shouting. alternateending stpatricksday theloudhouse lincolnloud theloudhousefanfiction stpatricksday2022 Requested by austin2468. *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. With that, the parents just held each other for the remainder of the night, promising to do whatever it took to earn back their children's trust. Luna turned to him with a glare on her face and said, "Forget it, dad! And Lori and Lisa. "Why?" Lynn: FINE! Everyone in the room went silent, stood still, afraid to make a move or a noise. Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. But I'm not entirelyinnocent myself." I am an 11 year old boy, not some object to be pushed away and than used! Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. My first story is done. Morag: is it now? We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." ", Lynn: "We forgot to lock the windows! Thats not how it works! It's too broken, even for me! nosuchluck loudhouse Well here is an alternate ending to No Such Luck that ends on a happy note. "Really," Luan said, raising her eyebrows at her parents, "Because if you ask me parents don't go skinny dipping at night, or get the entire family kicked out of the hotel or make their children feel guilty for ruining a vacation that they already ruined." ", (Lynn starts running towards him. They knew their kids wouldn't like that but this was supposed to be a weekend for themselves, not the family, and the kids should've just accepted it and gone to Ruth's. "Now go to your room," Lori said, pointing to their parents' bedroom, but when they still sat on the couch feeling guilty, she yelled, "NOW!" Lucy: Well, you covered for me and saved me from all this non-stop torment. Goodbye for now. His choreography is so dated. I'm not. They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. (The other sisters come over onto the main couch. It's my first ever one shot I've done. ], Family: "CONGRATULATIONS! I feel like a fool!" Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! At the end of the day, the family's bonds couldn't have been any stronger, they talked more and spent more time bonding, even if it just watching something on the TV. After a few seconds, the same pounding noise was heard yet again, this time even louder.